SHMUEL: is a Jewish boy held captive in a concentration camp on the other side of a electrified fence that seperates a boy (Bruno) and Shmuel, that have a lot in common, but live in different worlds.
BRUNO: Is a German boy who lives an ordinary life until he discovers the secrets held behind the electric fence and he meets a boy (Shmuel), who have a lot in common, but live in different worlds.
I really liked how you wrote this post and how it is short but gets point across.
ReplyDeleteTwo things however:
1. The Section talking about Shmuel, a few words are on the same line as the image while the others are not and it looks kind of strange.
2. Also for Bruno you wrote:
"...and he meets a boy, who have a lot in common..."
try changing it to "...and he meets a boy, the two discover they have a lot in common..."
just a simple grammatical error and an aesthetic error, but everything else is really good.